Looking into how I did revisions in my first project from the beginning of the semester, I did not put in as much effort as I had been for this project. I have always had problems with making sure my sentences are perfect and making sure that paragraphs make sense. Organization is another problem I have always had while writing papers that I really never had a chance to work on in high school due to the focus of classes being on the content provided, rather than what my work looks like. For this particular submission I had decided to pick the project #3 paper, “What I’m Learning.” There were three rough drafts to this paper before the final was submitted, but each draft became longer and longer. About 300 words were added to every draft; but while doing this I also fixed sentences that may have needed to be changed for not making sense. Peer review revealed to me that there was still a lot of work that needed to go into writing this paper. Also not the most complex concept for a paper, this is a recent development in all of our lives and looking at correlations from the past almost puts a sense of additional fear in me making this paper especially hard for me to have to write. I think I ended up doing a really good job on it in the end, but it was a really hard process to get it to where it ended up going.